Introduction (6-8 sentences)
Lead-in (attention getter)
My name is Rodrigo, I’m going to tell you the reasons of why i am a unique person, although there are a lot of things that i do and enjoy, this are my favorite things.
build up to thesis statement
In some way everyone is a unique person because we all do different things and have different hobbies but the things that i am going to mention next are the thins that i consider that make me a unique.
thesis statement (main idea of the essay=essay map: main argument+ the three point you’re going to discuss
I am an unique person because i have many hobbies, enjoys trying new experiences and like to be with my family and friends.
Body paragraph (8-12 sentences)
Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)
I have many hobbies such as play guitar, read novels, write stories, watch movies, listen to music.
Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)
- Play guitar.
- Watch movies.
Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)
I think that having hobbies it’s important because they make us enjoy our life.
Body paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)
Topic sentence 2
Enjoy trying new experiences like traveling to places that i have never been before, taste new kinds of food although i don’t like them, play new games, learn about history and new languages.
- Eat food
We have to try new experiences, so in that way we wont get bored of doing the same things.
Body paragraph 3(8-12 sentences)
Topic sentence 3
Be with my family and friends because like to talk with them, hang out with my friends, go to somewhere with them and enjoy been together, watch movies.
- talk with my friends
- hang out
- watch movies
We all need to spend time with our family and friends, it would be very sad a life in solitude.
conclusion (6-8 sentences)
Paraphrase thesis statement
In life we have to learn to enjoy those little pleasures that make us happy when we are suffering the stress that exist in the world.
Paraphrase topic sentences
For me the most important things are my family and friends and enjoy the hobbies that i have.
Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)
we all are unique in our own way, so we just have to enjoy that things that make us “unique”.