• Intro

  • Body Paragraph 1

  • Body Paragraph 2

  • Body Paragraph 3

  • Conclussion

  • Lead-in

    Develoopment (build up to the thesis)

    Thesis

  • Topic sentence

    Supporting Details

    Concluding sentence

  • Topic Sentence

    Supporting Details

    Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

    Supporting Details

    Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis

    Paraphrase topic sentences

    Final thoughts

  • Unfortunately not everyone gets that they want.

  • This essay its gonna be about 3 important aspects in my life, my family, my goals and my hobbies.

  • If i achieved all of my goals for sure I’m gonna be the happiest person in the world.

    • Get a good score in the ACT Test

    • Get a job in Wal-Mart

    • Learn how to survive without my parents

  • One of my favorite hobbies to do during the day

    • Play videogames with my little brother
    • Watch sports on the TV

    • Go to the gym in the afternoons

  • My family is formed by 4 people: my little brother, my dad, my mom and me.

    • My father is a lawyer he works very hard to make sure that all of our family’s needs are taken care of.
    • My mother works in my house

    • My little brother is too playful

  • I think that I need to strive a lot to reach my goals because lately I had a really bad days and lots of failures, so I need to improve and reach my goals, so I can be more happy

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