Intro

Lead-in

Develoopment (build up to the thesis)

Thesis

Unfortunately not everyone gets that they want.

This essay its gonna be about 3 important aspects in my life, my family, my goals and my hobbies.

Body Paragraph 1

Topic sentence

Supporting Details

Concluding sentence

If i achieved all of my goals for sure I’m gonna be the happiest person in the world.

Body Paragraph 2

Topic Sentence

Supporting Details

Concluding sentence

One of my favorite hobbies to do during the day

Body Paragraph 3

Topic sentence

Supporting Details

Concluding sentence

My family is formed by 4 people: my little brother, my dad, my mom and me.

Conclussion

Paraphrase thesis

Paraphrase topic sentences

Final thoughts

I think that I need to strive a lot to reach my goals because lately I had a really bad days and lots of failures, so I need to improve and reach my goals, so I can be more happy