Develoopment (build up to the thesis)
Unfortunately not everyone gets that they want.
This essay its gonna be about 3 important aspects in my life, my family, my goals and my hobbies.
Body Paragraph 1
If i achieved all of my goals for sure I’m gonna be the happiest person in the world.
Get a good score in the ACT Test
Get a job in Wal-Mart
Learn how to survive without my parents
Body Paragraph 2
One of my favorite hobbies to do during the day
Watch sports on the TV
Go to the gym in the afternoons
Body Paragraph 3
My family is formed by 4 people: my little brother, my dad, my mom and me.
My mother works in my house
My little brother is too playful
Paraphrase topic sentences
I think that I need to strive a lot to reach my goals because lately I had a really bad days and lots of failures, so I need to improve and reach my goals, so I can be more happy