Intro
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Conclusion
Lead-in
Development (build up to the thesis)
Thesis
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Concluding Sentence
Topic Sentence
Supporting details
Concluding sentence
Topic Sentence
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Concluding sentence
Paraphrase thesis
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Final thoughts
Life is like a roller coaster, it has its ups and downs.
My family, goals and my sport have made me who I am as a person today.
My family has to be the main reason who I am as a person.
My goals have pushed me to become the person I am today and to keep focus on what I want.
My interest in my sport have grown me into my character as a teen-adult.
My family, goals and interest in my sport have opened my eyes to see who I really am.
Having a family member who has raised me from the start has been a big role who I am as a person. My goals have pushed me more then my limits and shown me I can do it. Who would of thought a sport could have grown me to be better person.
I thank god for my family, education and my sport I get to experience everyday.