• Intro

  • Body Paragraph 1

  • Body Paragraph 2

  • Body Paragraph 3

  • Conclusion

  • Lead-in

    Development (build up to the thesis)

    Thesis

  • Topic Sentence

    Supporting details

    Concluding Sentence

  • Topic Sentence

    Supporting details

    Concluding sentence

  • Topic Sentence
    Supporting details
    Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis
    Paraphrase topic sentence
    Final thoughts

  • Life is like a roller coaster, it has its ups and downs.

  • My family, goals and my sport have made me who I am as a person today.

  • My family has to be the main reason who I am as a person.

    • My mother.
    • She’s my backbone/supporter.
    • I couldn’t live without her.
  • My goals have pushed me to become the person I am today and to keep focus on what I want.

    • Pass all of the 3 TSI.
    • do 2-3 more years in STC.
    • Transfer to another college.
  • My interest in my sport have grown me into my character as a teen-adult.

    • Crossfit
    • Changed me to a better person
    • Gained a healthier lifestyle
  • My family, goals and interest in my sport have opened my eyes to see who I really am.

  • Having a family member who has raised me from the start has been a big role who I am as a person. My goals have pushed me more then my limits and shown me I can do it. Who would of thought a sport could have grown me to be better person.

  • I thank god for my family, education and my sport I get to experience everyday.

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