• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in (attention getter)

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you’re going to discuss)

  • Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)

  • Topic sentence 2

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence 3

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

  • Paraphrase topic sentences

  • Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)

  • I am a strong willing person that loves to lend a hand to people in need.

  • Who am I? I am unique individual who values his family Loves the sport football and would want a carer in being a coach and have done dancing for a while that has made me into who I am today

  • I am all for my family since the day I was born they are everything have done nothing but the best for e and the’ve played a big role in my life.

    • Since I was born the have always taught me right from wrong
    • I have a little bother with a rare condition who has actually gotten our family closer
  • I was a dancer I danced with many people and because of those people pushing me to do more to my life and continue my education in college.

    • I’ve done and meet people and pushed me
    • I have gotten so much confidence and chneged how i am around people.
  • Football has done so much for me as in fridnds and has given me so many more opportunities in life. Because of football i want to pursue in being a coach.

    • I’ve wanted to keep on going with what i love
    • Is what i am studying at college
  • I am an individual that is always going to be a helping hand to friends and family. Well cordinated with my body and am an athletic always wanting impovements.

  • Family comes first on my list any day next comes my love for football where i want to become something in the sport and i will always have the good skills of dancing i have had in my experience.

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