Introduction (6-8 sentences)

Lead-in (attention getter)

I am a strong willing person that loves to lend a hand to people in need.

Build up to thesis statement

Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you’re going to discuss)

Who am I? I am unique individual who values his family Loves the sport football and would want a carer in being a coach and have done dancing for a while that has made me into who I am today

Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

I am all for my family since the day I was born they are everything have done nothing but the best for e and the’ve played a big role in my life.

Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)

• Since I was born the have always taught me right from wrong
• I have a little bother with a rare condition who has actually gotten our family closer

Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)

Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence 2

I was a dancer I danced with many people and because of those people pushing me to do more to my life and continue my education in college.

Supporting details

• I’ve done and meet people and pushed me
• I have gotten so much confidence and chneged how i am around people.

Concluding sentence

Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence 3

Football has done so much for me as in fridnds and has given me so many more opportunities in life. Because of football i want to pursue in being a coach.

Supporting details

• I’ve wanted to keep on going with what i love
• Is what i am studying at college

Concluding sentence

Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

Paraphrase thesis statement

I am an individual that is always going to be a helping hand to friends and family. Well cordinated with my body and am an athletic always wanting impovements.

Paraphrase topic sentences

Family comes first on my list any day next comes my love for football where i want to become something in the sport and i will always have the good skills of dancing i have had in my experience.

Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)