• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead -in (attention getter)

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay; main argument + the three points your essay is going to discuss)

  • Topic sentence 1 ( main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting details (2,3 examples to explain your topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentence (wraps whole paragraph together and signals you’re ready to move on to the next topic)

  • Topic sentence 1

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence 1

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

  • Paraphrase three topic senteces

  • Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember after reading your paper?

  • It is awesome how in my short life I passed for a big things in my family.

    • I am very proud of me and my family, we are very close and we have to learn about when My brothers and me went to Brownsville, then when my brother and me moved to McAllen and now that I get married.

    • My brothers and me went to Brownsville.

      • We have to take care of ourselves.
      • We live together but without my mom, she was on Mexico.
      • My brothers and me were absolute be responsible about everything.
    • We moved to McAllen Tx., after a year.

      • We moved because its more close to Reynosa Tamps.
      • We have to star again, like meet friend, the streets and everything.
      • McAllen its an good place to shop but no to live.
    • Most important thing was that I get married.

      • My mom was happy but sad because she has to understand that im growing.
      • My brother gets a little angry because he was concern about my future
      • My sister was happy for my wedding, and also exciting.
      • I went to Brownsville to have a better future.
      • My brother and me moved to McAllen because we passed for hard things.
      • I get married.
    • As you can see I had hard thing that happened in my life. But that do not make me sad o thing that I cant. If I can, anyone can do it. Moved around the word, and met new people is cool, because we can known the manner and education of different cultures. Get married is the thing that everybody gonna loved. But the most important thing its have the support of my family. My mom always be there with me, no necessary in person, but in my heart. Also he call me every day to know how the day was going. And my brothers always support me on my decisions.

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