• Intro (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in

  • Development (build up to the thesis)

  • Thesis

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis

  • Paraphrase topic sentences

  • Final thoughts

  • My life is pretty normal compared to others.

  • One of my favorite hobbies is photography. Me and my family always enjoy spending quality time together. My family and friends come to me for advise.

      • my favorite hobbies
      • student at South Texas College
    • My family and I really enjoy quality time together especially when my brothers come down since we rarely see them.

      • really enjoy family quality time
      • especially when my brothers come down
        *we always have a blast together
    • My family and friends always turn to me for advise and i enjoy helping them out.

    • *friends come to me for advise

      • I enjoy giving them advise
      • I will always be there for my friends and family
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