Intro (6-8 sentences)

Lead-in

My life is pretty normal compared to others.

Development (build up to the thesis)

Thesis

One of my favorite hobbies is photography. Me and my family always enjoy spending quality time together. My family and friends come to me for advise.

Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence

Supporting details

Concluding sentence

Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence

My family and I really enjoy quality time together especially when my brothers come down since we rarely see them.

Supporting details

Concluding sentence

Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence

My family and friends always turn to me for advise and i enjoy helping them out.

Supporting details

*friends come to me for advise

Concluding sentence

Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

Paraphrase thesis

Paraphrase topic sentences

Final thoughts