• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in (attention getter)

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you’re going to discuss)

  • Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)

  • Topic sentence 2

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence 3

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

  • Paraphrase topic sentences

  • Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)

  • “We never know how close we are… Never give up on your dreams”.

  • I have never told to anybody about my life, and I do not how to begin to explain about my life, but there are some things that show who I am. They are my family and I think it is the most important that a person has in her/his life, also I want to talk about my life experiences that many of them are about family and my interests that I think each person has different interests and them make interesting people.

  • I am grateful for the family that God gave. I am always going to prefer to spend time with my family that with friends. I want to explain also about my mother and my relationship with her. She is my role model and our relationship is very good.

    • My mother was widowed since I was three years old.
    • She gives me her support to came to United States.
    • On April I had an accident and she did not get angry.
  • For everything that I already mentioned I think I have the best mother and father in the whole world and I have the best parents in the same person. I really love her.

  • Sometimes I think I have been in many situations for being nineteen years old.

    • When I was three years old my father died.
    • My favorite cousin died almost two years ago.
    • I live by myself
  • Many things have changed and God always has a purpose in each situation that he gives you to make you a stronger person.

  • I am an ordinary teenager who love soccer, cooking, math, business, music, work, helping people, chips, tacos, spicy food, and definitely I love spending time with family and friends.

    • I love to help people and I always try to do my best to help them.
    • I was in a soccer team.
    • I work since I was fifteen years old.
  • I think every person is different , each one thinks different and is talented in something different, so whatever you do, do your best and always do it for you no for someone else.

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