• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in (attention getter)

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you’re going to discuss)

  • Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)

  • Topic sentence 2

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence 3

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

  • Paraphrase topic sentences

  • Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)

  • Why is it really complicated for as people to achieve our goals?

  • I am a person that believe on hard working, getting involve in voluntering organizations, and sports.

  • By working hard you can achieve anything in life.

    • school
    • work
    • goals
    • Voluntering people in need is important in life.

      • getting credit hours
      • helping someone in need
      • the feeling when they say, “Thank you!”
    • Doing sports is good to for health.

      • Healthy
      • Fun
      • To have a long life
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