Introduction (6-8 sentences)

Lead-in (attention getter)

Why is it really complicated for as people to achieve our goals?

Build up to thesis statement

Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you’re going to discuss)

I am a person that believe on hard working, getting involve in voluntering organizations, and sports.

Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

By working hard you can achieve anything in life.

Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)

• school
• work
• goals

Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)

Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence 2

Voluntering people in need is important in life.

Supporting details

• getting credit hours
• helping someone in need
• the feeling when they say, “Thank you!”

Concluding sentence

Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence 3

Doing sports is good to for health.

Supporting details

• Healthy
• Fun
• To have a long life

Concluding sentence

Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

Paraphrase thesis statement

Paraphrase topic sentences

Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)