Introduction (6-8 sentences)

Lead-in (attention getter)



Why is it really complicated for as people to achieve our goals?

Build up to thesis statement

Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you're going to discuss)



I am a person that believe on hard working, getting involve in voluntering organizations, and sports.





Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)



By working hard you can achieve anything in life.

Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)



* school
* work
* goals

Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)



Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence 2

Voluntering people in need is important in life.

Supporting details

* getting credit hours
* helping someone in need
* the feeling when they say, "Thank you!"

Concluding sentence

Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence 3

Doing sports is good to for health.

Supporting details

* Healthy
* Fun
* To have a long life

Concluding sentence

Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

Paraphrase thesis statement



Paraphrase topic sentences

Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)