• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in (attention getter)

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you’re going to discuss)

  • Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)

  • Topic sentence 2

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence 3

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • I consider myself very blessed in life, not only because I grew up being taught very good manners. I’ve had the opportunity to continue my education further and set a high standard for myself to become an engineer. I’ve have had the chance to travel many places and explore the world.

  • The summary of myself, life experience, and places I’ve been to is the best story I can tell because no one else knows it better than I do.

  • I was born and raised in Mexico but moved to the US at age of twelve.

    • I was born in Zacapu, Michoacan Mexico.
    • I moved to Ocotlan, Jalisco Mexico at age five with my family.
    • I moved again but this time to the US, McAllen, Texas at age twelve with my family.
  • My Life experiences have made me learn from my mistakes and grow as a person.

    • My childhood phase of taking the wrong path.
    • Soccer, my best skill and the injury I received from playing it.
  • I have visited many unforgettable places in my life.

    • Places I’ve visited in the U.S.
    • Places I’ve visited while on a tour to Europe.
    • Places I’ve visited in Mexico
    • I am at this point of my life is exactly where I wanted to be growing up. I’ve learned from my mistakes and been very careful not to make them again. I’ve been through many obstacles, yet always reached the finish line. I’ve fulfilled my dream which was to visit Europe and take a tour of many other places. I have a job that I am very proud of, and I’m attending school and giving it my all to reach my career goal. I feel proud of myself, and I know I ‘m also making my parents proud who have been with me every step of the way.

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