• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in (attention getter)

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you’re going to discuss)

  • Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)

  • Topic sentence 2

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence 3

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

  • Paraphrase topic sentences

  • Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)

  • Why do I do I consider myself lucky? Well simply because there is nobody like me other than me.

  • I consider myself a discipline person, because I always make time for my family, I am putting all my effort on school, and I tend to eat a lot.

  • I am always making time for my family.

    • I’m always with them wherever I go.
    • I can’t live without my family.
    • I learn a lot from my parents.
  • I’m putting extra effort on school.

    • I am doing everything possible to pass.
    • I’m putting extra effort in class.
    • I’m trying to be the best student.
  • I am always eating over the limit.

    • I’m always eating.
    • When I’m bored, I eat.
    • Food is a precious thing to me.
  • Making time for my family, putting extra effort in school, and eating a lot, disciplines me.

  • I wouldn’t be who I am, if it weren’t for my family, school education, and the way I eat.

  • I strongly encourage everybody to be themselves, and never change who they are.

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