• Intro (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in

  • Development (build up to the thesis)

  • Thesis

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis

  • Paraphrase topic sentences

  • Final thoughts

  • My father is the most responsible person in the world since he provides all the necessities for the family, lends a shoulder to his relatives, and makes sure that all his kids do well in school.

  • My father works hard to make sure that all of our family’s needs are taken care of.

    • works a full time job
    • fixes things around the house
  • All of my relatives come to my father whenever they have a problem because he is a caring person.

    • lent my uncle money for rent
    • sent food to hospital when cousin was there
    • always concerned about people’s health
  • Ever since my siblings and I were little, my father has always made sure that we did well in school.

    • helps us with homework
    • meets regularly with our teachers
    • goes to our sports events
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