Intro (6-8 sentences)
Development (build up to the thesis)
My father is the most responsible person in the world since he provides all the necessities for the family, lends a shoulder to his relatives, and makes sure that all his kids do well in school.
Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)
My father works hard to make sure that all of our family’s needs are taken care of.
- works a full time job
- fixes things around the house
Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)
All of my relatives come to my father whenever they have a problem because he is a caring person.
- lent my uncle money for rent
- sent food to hospital when cousin was there
- always concerned about people’s health
Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)
Ever since my siblings and I were little, my father has always made sure that we did well in school.
- helps us with homework
- meets regularly with our teachers
- goes to our sports events
Conclusion (6-8 sentences)
Paraphrase topic sentences