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Intro (6-8 sentences)

Lead-in

Development (build up to the thesis)

Thesis

My father is the most responsible person in the world since he provides all the necessities for the family, lends a shoulder to his relatives, and makes sure that all his kids do well in school.

Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence

My father works hard to make sure that all of our family’s needs are taken care of.

Supporting details

  • works a full time job
  • fixes things around the house

Concluding sentence

Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence

All of my relatives come to my father whenever they have a problem because he is a caring person.

Supporting details

  • lent my uncle money for rent
  • sent food to hospital when cousin was there
  • always concerned about people’s health

Concluding sentence

Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence

Ever since my siblings and I were little, my father has always made sure that we did well in school.

Supporting details

  • helps us with homework
  • meets regularly with our teachers
  • goes to our sports events

Concluding sentence

Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

Paraphrase thesis

Paraphrase topic sentences

Final thoughts