Intro (6-8 sentences)

Lead-in



Development (build up to the thesis)

Thesis



My father is the most responsible person in the world since he provides all the necessities for the family, lends a shoulder to his relatives, and makes sure that all his kids do well in school.

Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence

My father works hard to make sure that all of our family's needs are taken care of.

Supporting details

* works a full time job
* fixes things around the house

Concluding sentence



Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence

All of my relatives come to my father whenever they have a problem because he is a caring person.

Supporting details

* lent my uncle money for rent
* sent food to hospital when cousin was there
* always concerned about people's health 



Concluding sentence



Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence

Ever since my siblings and I were little, my father has always made sure that we did well in school.

Supporting details

* helps us with homework
* meets regularly with our teachers
* goes to our sports events

Concluding sentence

Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

Paraphrase thesis



Paraphrase topic sentences

Final thoughts