• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in (attention getter)

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you’re going to discuss)

  • Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)

  • Topic sentence 2

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence 3

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

  • Paraphrase topic sentences

  • Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)

  • I am Debanhi Ramos I am 19 yrs. old and I am currently studing in STC my major is biology and i want to become a doctor.
    -I have a certificate in medical office specialist
    -I want to become a doctor
    -I like to help people

  • While I was in high school i got a certificated along with my high school diploma because I got college clases

  • I want to become a doctor because I know some people don’t have the money to go to a consult and because of that they got ill and they can die and sometimes they can spread a disease. I like to help people that is one of the main reasons I know i will love being a doctor so I can go out and help the people who really need it.

  • I am Debanhi Ramos I am 19 yrs. old and I am currently studing in STC my major is biology and i want to become a doctor.
    -I have a certificate in medical office specialist
    -I want to become a doctor
    -I like to help people
    While I was in high school i got a certificated along with my high school diploma because I got college classes.
    I want to become a doctor because I know some people don’t have the money to go to a consult and because of that they got ill and they can die and sometimes they can spread a disease.

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