Introduction (6-8 sentences)

Lead-in (attention getter)

Build up to thesis statement

Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you're going to discuss)



Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

I am Debanhi Ramos I am 19 yrs. old and I am currently studing in STC my major is biology and i want to become a doctor.
-I have a certificate in medical office specialist
-I want to become a doctor
-I like to help people

While I was in high school i got a certificated along with my high school diploma because I got college clases





Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)



I want to become a doctor because I know some people don't have the money to go to a consult and because of that they got ill and they can die and sometimes they can spread a disease. I like to help people that is one of the main reasons I know i will love being a doctor so I can go out and help the people who really need it.



Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)





I am Debanhi Ramos I am 19 yrs. old and I am currently studing in STC my major is biology and i want to become a doctor.
-I have a certificate in medical office specialist
-I want to become a doctor
-I like to help people
While I was in high school i got a certificated along with my high school diploma because I got college classes.
I want to become a doctor because I know some people don't have the money to go to a consult and because of that they got ill and they can die and sometimes they can spread a disease.

Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence 2

Supporting details

Concluding sentence

Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence 3

Supporting details

Concluding sentence

Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

Paraphrase thesis statement

Paraphrase topic sentences

Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)