Introduction (6-8 sentences)

Lead in

Not everyone gets to be who they want to be in life.

Build up thesis statement

Esteban Soto, that’s a name of a person but not just any person that’s me! When people say that name or talk about me I wonder what others think of me, like who am I? I hope people don’t bad mouth me , but if they do i don’t care because i know who I am.

Thesis statement (main idea of the eassy

Who am I, I know exactly who I am! I’m very friendly towards others, very caring for others and I love doing activities like playing all types of sports but mainly basketball!

Body paragraph 1(8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence (main idea of the paragraph)

I’m the type of person who has a heart, I feel for others who are in need!

Supporting details (examples of your topic sentence)

Concluding sentence(ties whole paragraph together)

Body paragraph 2(8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence

On my spare time i like hitting a workout or just going outdoors to get some type of sweat in like playing basketball, football, go on a run ex.

Supporting details

Concluding sentence

Body paragraph 3(8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence

I’m a great friend to all my friends.

Supporting details

Concluding sentence

Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

Paraphrase thesis statement

I know definitely who i am, I’m a trustworthy person, i have a soft heart for things and a very active person.

Paraphrase your three topic sentences

I have a heart for the things i do, and for people who are old, disable and homeless. I’m a very active person, always trying to do something or always doing some type of exercise. My friends know they can relay on me for anything they need.

End with final thoughts (what do you want your reader to do/remember?)

I want people to remember as a independent/dependable person. The dude that never got tired, because of being in shape. The friend that people relayed on when they were in need of some help.