• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-12 sentences)

  • Lead-in

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay + the three points you’re going to focus on)

  • Topic sentence (main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting Details (examples of your topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentence (ties whole paragraph together)

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentences

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentences

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

  • Paraphrase your three topic sentences

  • End your final thought (what do you want your reader to do/remember?)

  • Coming from a sandy dry environment where the only thing you can sense is sea water and fish.

  • I guess being born and raised in Corpus Christi you can kind of say the environment has moved me in a certain way.

  • I was raised in a home where dinner is caught rather then bought. It has trend my generation to continue being outdoors to where it influences my origin on where I come from. Raised in a town where fishing, the love for water, and camping.

  • Since I can remember I would love to tag along with my grandpa to go fishing with him.

    • Drive the boat
    • Learn new path through the open waters
    • Having a good time making memories
  • My grandpa has taught me a lot through the years.

  • My Wife calls my a fish because I love the feel of fresh water rolling through my skin.

    • Swimming
    • Relaxing
    • Surfing
  • I hope my children share the same love i have for water.

  • Being able to have the opportunities to experience camping.

    • Tents
    • Bon-Fires
    • ATV’s, Rock Climbing
  • This has endured me to be more out going.

  • Corpus Christi has provided me a chance to help grow my personality with many experiences.

    • Fishing
    • Water
    • Camping
  • Corpus Christi is my home town on where I come from. It has showed me many ways of living and cultures.

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