• Intro

  • Body paragraph 1

  • Body paragraph 2

  • body paragraph 3

  • Conclusion

  • Lead-in

  • Development(build up to the thesis)

  • Thesis

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis

  • Paraphrase topic sentence

  • Final Thoughts

  • A very known novelist Ralph Ellison one day wrote “ Some people are your relatives but others are your ancestors, and you choose the ones you want to have as your ancestors. You create yourself out of those values.”

  • Traditions, risks, and decisions, are just some factors that I just learned from both of my families, after a quick interview to my mother.

  • Frist of all, I will like to introduce the costumes from my father’s family.

    • My grandparent likes to be respected to respect others no matter what.
    • My grand mother things that to success you need to always look for myself before others.
      *My fathers believes are to thanks God for each day.
  • All of this principles from my father’s family had been very helpful in my life.

  • Secondly, I learned information from my mother’s family that I didn’t know.

    • my great grandparents moved from farms to the city to find jobs
    • my mother took the risk of migrating to north America
    • my family has expanded in Honduras, El Salvador, Mexico, And U.S
  • There are various factor why my family had took risks and to be separated.

  • Finally, I had learn to be independent from my current family which is only my mother, brother, and sister.

    • I have learned how to survive in the real world.
    • How to take good and bad decisions.
    • How to defend myself.
  • Technology has become our best choice to stay in contact with our loved ones.

  • Ancestors are the people were you got the values that presently you have. In other words you are made of them.

  • From the information that I got about my mother and father families. I noticed that neither of my families are reach descendants but, they had been strong enough to confront live and survive.

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