• Intro (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentence)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentence)

  • Lead In

  • Development ( build up the thesis)

  • Thesis

  • Topic Sentence

  • Supporting Details

  • Topic Sentence

  • Supporting Details

  • Concluding Sentence

  • Topic Sentence

  • Supporting Details

  • Concluding Sentence

  • Paraphrase Thesis

  • Paraphrase Topic Sentences

  • Final Thoughts

  • Have you ever stopped and wondered what has guided you to become who you are today?

  • The three things that have influenced me to become the person that I am, are my interests, my family, and my goals

  • There are many events that I enjoy doing on my spare time.

    • Baking
    • searching for innovative fashion ideas
    • help my children develop
  • The most influential aspect of my life has been my family.

    • good morals
    • supportive family
  • The direction of my future depends on me staying focused on my goals.

    • successful college
    • graduate with a degree
    • become a teacher
  • In end, my life has been shaped by many things but more so by three things, my interests, my family and my goals.

  • These influences have always been and will always be a part of my life. While identifying them was not easy, each one of them has had a significant impact on me. The way that each one has made an impact on me has made selecting them that much easier. I sometimes wonder who I would be without them.

  • I feel very privileged to have these as aspects in my life, because they have been such a positive motivation.

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