• Lead-in

    build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement:

  • Topic sentence 1:

  • Supporting details:

  • Concluding sentence:

  • Topic sentence 2:

  • Supporting details:

  • Conclusion sentence:

  • Topic sentence 3:

  • Supporting details:

  • Conclusion sentence:

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

    Paraphrase three topic sentence

  • Finals tought

  • All our dreams can come true if we have the courage to pursue them

  • I am very strong because I a person that whatever I think I make it happen, such as pursue my goals, learn for my experience and enjoy my hobbies to distract me.

  • I am a person that I like to achieve my goals and don’t give up for any obstacle.

  • •I study nursing.
    •I learn another language such as English and Spanish.

  • All of my family support me with my plans because they will want to be a successful person.

  • I had good and bad experiences that has made me mature and grow as a person.

  • •I left my home town and friends to come to this country to get a better life.

    *In consequence of coming to live to McAllen I’ve had to leave part of my family and not seeing them that often.

  • Overall my experiences have get me outcome and positive thing.

  • I like to do my hobbies because it’s relaxing and helps me be better and healthier.

  • •I exercise one hour every day.
    •I read one hour every day to relax my mind.

  • My hobbies is the most important part of my life because that’s what distracts me from school.

  • Came to another country change all in my life because I met new people and tried new thing like learn another language and the opportunity to have a better education for me and my siblings.

  • Many people wish to have the opportunity that I have. Im very thankful for all blessing that I have and I know no matter how many obstacles I would have I never give up.

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