• Intro (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in

  • Development (build up to the thesis)

  • Thesis

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis

  • Paraphrase topic sentences

  • Final thoughts

  • No money, no problem! Come for office visits.

  • I am ambitious and I have big dreams, I also like to take challenges because my uncle pushes me to be a better person.

  • I am ambitious.

    • I am ambitious because my dream is to be successful in life.
    • I am ambitious because I like to take challenges.
      *I am ambitious because I have an uncle who pushes me to be a better and successful person.
  • I have big dreams.

    • I have big dreams because I have set up goals to be successful in life
    • I have big dreams because I want to achieve more than my parents did.
      *I want to meet my goals.
  • I want to be a better person.

    • I want to help people with low income.
    • I want to support my family.
    • I want a better life.
  • I have big dreams because I want to be a better person and I am also an ambitious person.

  • I am ambitious because I like to take challenges and then make it real. I have big dreams because I want to be better and successful in life. I want to be a better person because I know I can be someone better and helpful.

  • I will like to people to remember me because what I have done in life. I want to be remembered because I was someone who causes an impact in people‚Äôs life so they can be better.

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