• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in (attention getter)

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you’re going to discuss)

  • Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)

  • Topic sentence 2

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence 3

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

  • Paraphrase topic sentences

  • Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)

  • My life is based in Mexico, all my studies have been in that country, I’ve had a good life, stable, i was born is USA but my roots are Mexican, i do not speak much English but i like talking to people, being sociable, i think the study is the basis for our future why i give a great role to subject, another thing that i love is football is an exciting sport.

  • I believe that life is beautiful, that is beautiful and i like to live this life, i enjoy my family and the things i do in my life.

  • I am sociable person because i like talk with persons and i have a good sense of humor.

  • I am sociable person.

    • I like talk

    • I can’t be quiet

    • Meet new people

  • In conclusion i am a sociable person so i like to be and i think i can open many doors in life though that’s not all but i think it’s important.

  • I like study because I get more and better knowledge, it is a good way to learn new things.

    • Get good grades

    • Learn more

  • Studying is always important and necessary, because not only studying to finish college but also to learn more and have a broad knowledge.

  • I like playing football is a very interesting, exciting sport and helps me stay in shape, makes me feel good about myself.

    • Good physical condition

    • Give me credits.

  • The football is a good hobby, but it also teaches you discipline, it gives you good physical condition and in conclusion i could not live without football, it’s a life style.

  • In conclusion i think that the things that i do help me to transcend in my life, be sociable, study and play football the things the defines me as a person.

  • Without this aspects i think would be hard to progress, maybe this persons have other aspects that define then and respect the persons.

  • To conclude i think that everyone is different and that must be respect.

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