Introduction (6-8 sentences)

Lead-in (attention getter)

My life is based in Mexico, all my studies have been in that country, I've had a good life, stable, i was born is USA but my roots are Mexican, i do not speak much English but i like talking to people, being sociable, i think the study is the basis for our future why i give a great role to subject, another thing that i love is football is an exciting sport.

Build up to thesis statement

I believe that life is beautiful, that is beautiful and i like to live  this life, i enjoy my family and the things i do in my life.

Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you're going to discuss)

I am sociable person because i like talk with persons and i have a good sense of humor.







Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)



I am sociable person.

Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)

* I like talk 

* I can't be quiet

* Meet new people

Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)

In conclusion i am a sociable person so i like to be and i think i can open many doors in life though that's not all but i think it's important.

Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence 2

I like study because I get more and better knowledge, it is a good way to learn new things.

Supporting details

* Get good grades

* Learn more

Concluding sentence

Studying is always important and necessary, because not only studying to finish college but also to learn more and have a broad knowledge.   

Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

Topic sentence 3

I like playing football is a very interesting, exciting sport and helps me stay in shape, makes me feel good about myself.

Supporting details

* Good physical condition

* Give me credits.

Concluding sentence

The football is a  good hobby, but it also teaches you discipline, it gives you good physical condition and in conclusion i could not live without football, it's a life style. 

Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

Paraphrase thesis statement

In conclusion i think that the things that i do help me to transcend in my life, be sociable, study and play football the things the defines me as a person.

Paraphrase topic sentences

Without this aspects i think would be hard to progress, maybe this persons have other aspects that define then and respect the persons. 

Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)

To conclude i think that everyone is different and that must be respect.