• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 1 ( 8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in (attention getter)

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument+ the three points you’re going to discuss)

  • Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

  • supporting details (2-3 examples to support topic sentence)

  • concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)

  • Topic sentence 2

  • supporting details

  • concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence 3

  • supporting details

  • concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

  • paraphrase topic sentence

  • Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember)?

  • How do you classify yourself? If you were to ask me I would say disciplined.

  • I consider myself a discipline person, because I always make time for my family, workout when I have a free time and I eat healthy everyday no matter what I don’t eat junk food.

  • Even when I have a lot of homework I can be with my family.

    • I’m with when we eat dinner.
    • We go to the park at night to run.
  • I never miss a day of going to the gym.

    • After school I go right to the gym.
    • Always trying to motivate people to go workout.
  • I cant stand junk food.

    • Try to keep a healthy diet.
  • Making time for my family, never giving up on a rep when i’m working out, and keeping the healthy diet, disciplines myself.

  • I wouldn’t be who I am if I didn’t have the support of my family and the determination.

  • I strongly encourage everyone that doesn’t spend time with their family or doesn’t work out to try it out and see how much it can help.

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