essay 2

{"cards":[{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c2","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":624182,"position":1,"parentId":null,"content":"Introduction (6-8 sentences)"},{"_id":"4a74fa72e9e8dfd08a000044","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":830996,"position":0.5,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c2","content":""},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c3","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":624183,"position":1,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c2","content":"Lead-in (attention getter)"},{"_id":"4a74faffe9e8dfd08a000045","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":830998,"position":2,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c3","content":"Family is very important in my life and knowing our backgrounds is necessary to learn where we come from."},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c4","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":624184,"position":2,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c2","content":"Build up to thesis statement"},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c5","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":624185,"position":3,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c2","content":"Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you're going to discuss)"},{"_id":"4a75056be9e8dfd08a000046","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":831002,"position":7,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c5","content":"My family is a big part in every person lives and is veryb important to know the paternal lineage, the maternal lineage, and also our current family's story"},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c8","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":624188,"position":2,"parentId":null,"content":"Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)"},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c9","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":651531,"position":1,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c8","content":"Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)"},{"_id":"4a750f9ee9e8dfd08a000047","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":831007,"position":6,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c9","content":"My father's lineage is all from Monterrey, Mexico"},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439cb","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":651519,"position":2,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c8","content":"Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)"},{"_id":"4a7513e9e9e8dfd08a000048","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":831015,"position":6,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439cb","content":"My great-grandparents and my grandparents from my father's side and also my father they were all born and raised in Monterrey, Mexico."},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439cc","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":624192,"position":3,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c8","content":"Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)"},{"_id":"4a753a4fe9e8dfd08a000049","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":831066,"position":1,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439cc","content":"My parental lineage are all Mexicans "},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439cd","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":624193,"position":3,"parentId":null,"content":"Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)"},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439ce","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":624194,"position":1,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439cd","content":"Topic sentence 2"},{"_id":"4a753cdce9e8dfd08a00004a","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":831074,"position":4,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439ce","content":"My maternal lineage comes from a little town in Mexico called Los Aldamas, Nuevo Leon"},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439cf","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":624195,"position":2,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439cd","content":"Supporting details"},{"_id":"4a7540dae9e8dfd08a00004b","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":831080,"position":3,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439cf","content":"My great-grandparents and my grandparents and also my mother were born in Mexico but my grandparents decided to move to Texas . "},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d0","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":624196,"position":3,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439cd","content":"Concluding sentence"},{"_id":"4a7544d3e9e8dfd08a00004c","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":831083,"position":1,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d0","content":"My mother lineage are Mexicans but also USA citizens"},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d1","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":624197,"position":4,"parentId":null,"content":"Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)"},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d2","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":831085,"position":1,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d1","content":"Topic sentence 3"},{"_id":"4a7547b8e9e8dfd08a00004d","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":831087,"position":3,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d2","content":"My current family's story is that my mother was born in California and my father in Mexico so we are a mix of both countries"},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d3","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":624199,"position":2,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d1","content":"Supporting details"},{"_id":"4a754c44e9e8dfd08a00004e","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":831090,"position":3,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d3","content":"For example I was born in Mexico my sister in California and my brother in Texas. "},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d4","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":831092,"position":3,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d1","content":"Concluding sentence"},{"_id":"4a754ffee9e8dfd08a00004f","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":831096,"position":2,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d4","content":"Our current family is a little mix we have USA citizens but we are also Mexicans ."},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d5","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":624201,"position":5,"parentId":null,"content":"Conclusion (6-8 sentences)"},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d6","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":624202,"position":1,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d5","content":"Paraphrase thesis statement"},{"_id":"4a755384e9e8dfd08a000050","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":831099,"position":2,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d6","content":"My family's lineage is very interesting because we have both countries USA and Mexico in our heart"},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d7","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":624203,"position":2,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d5","content":"Paraphrase topic sentences"},{"_id":"4a75571de9e8dfd08a000051","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":831106,"position":2,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d7","content":"My mother and father lineage are a mix up of Mexico and USA"},{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d8","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":624204,"position":3,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d5","content":"Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)"},{"_id":"4a7559f1e9e8dfd08a000052","treeId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","seq":831109,"position":2,"parentId":"5411bc26f99783a551a439d8","content":"Family's lineage is really important to our currents lives because is interesting knowing our backgrounds "}],"tree":{"_id":"5411bc26f99783a551a439c1","name":"essay 2","publicUrl":"janeth"}}