• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • \Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in (attention getter)

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you’re going to discuss)

  • Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting Details

  • Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)

  • Topic sentence 2

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence 3

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

  • Paraphrase topic sentences

  • Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)

  • Sitting here and looking back, I don’t really know where to begin.

  • I am just a person that has dreams to accomplish become an RN, dance Folkloric, and help my parents.

  • Becoming a RN is something that I always dream since i was little. I’ll do whatever it takes to accomplish it, give everything of me and study really hard.

    • Never get bored
      -Learn each day
      -Cure people
  • When I dance folkloric I forget of any problem i have, dancing Mexican Folkloric is my passion.

  • -Takes out all my stress
    -I enjoy dancing and performing

  • I am the luckiest person to have such an amazing parents, they are the reason of who I am right know.

  • -They work hard to give me everything what I want

    • Thought me to be a good,carrying and lovely person
  • I am so blessed to see who am I and I will accomplish my dreams.

  • Not everyone is fortunate to accomplish their dreams, I am really thankful to have the support of my parents and I would never give up on my dreams.

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