• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in (attention getter)

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you’re going to discuss)

  • Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)

  • Topic sentence 2

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence 3

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

  • Paraphrase topic sentences

  • Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)

  • Does it affect you to know what people think about the way you are and how you are to others?

  • This questions has a great affect on people and how they react to it.

  • Even though I often have a negative personality, being this way helps me build my perseverance, work harder, and accomplish my goals.

  • Some of the negative characteristics of my personality include.

    • Doubting myself
    • Thinking twice of everything I’m about to do
    • Not being able to do things in a wimp.
  • On the hand I balance my negative personality with my perseverance in a lot of different things.

    • Doing things over, and over into perfect.
    • Asking a lot of questions to be correct in my work.
    • Managing my time to me on time for everything
    • Having a backup for everything, because you never know.
  • Therefore who I am has very complex sides that balance each other very good my negative thinking, with my hard work and perseverance on every thing I do.

    • Why I am this way
    • How I have learned of my mistakes
    • Balancing so I don’t over think something that is really simple and create more stress on my self.
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