• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body paragraph (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead in (attention getter)

  • Build up to (thesis statement)

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay essay map main argument + the three points you’re going to discuss)

  • Topic sentence 1 (main (idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentence wrap up paragraph and ties everything together)

  • Topic sentence 2 (main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence 3

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paragraph their statement

  • Paragraph their sentence

  • Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/understand)

      • My family lineage is one bond that even if I do not know very well, but I can feel it in my blood running like a thousand horses.

      • My father’s family comes from a military men that worked and still working in Mexico, and beautiful and smart woman with strong goals in their daily life.

        • My father’s parents die when he and his brothers were young.
        • My father’s family used work in the military
        • Woman in my family are beautiful, also strong physical and psychological.
        • Unlike my father’s family, my mother’s family comes from people who worked and still working in their own ranch, unite people with a strong feeling of love.

          • My mother’s family still living where they born.
          • They are hard-workers with small companies.
          • They are always helping themselves when someone need it.
          • I lived in a small town called Ozuluama until one day I came to Texas because the insecurity that started to show in Mexico.

            • I used to live near my grandmother.
            • The insecurity started to grown in the town making it unsafe to live anymore.
            • My family lives now in United States after leaving my last town.
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