Who Am I

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I continue forward no matter how hard it may be because if I don't do anything better I will never get anything better."},{"_id":"54107d76f99783a551a42f03","treeId":"54107d76f99783a551a42eed","seq":617047,"position":4,"parentId":"54107d76f99783a551a42efc","content":""},{"_id":"54107d76f99783a551a42f04","treeId":"54107d76f99783a551a42eed","seq":617048,"position":4,"parentId":null,"content":"Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)"},{"_id":"54107d76f99783a551a42f05","treeId":"54107d76f99783a551a42eed","seq":617049,"position":1,"parentId":"54107d76f99783a551a42f04","content":"Topic sentence"},{"_id":"54107d76f99783a551a42f06","treeId":"54107d76f99783a551a42eed","seq":620945,"position":1,"parentId":"54107d76f99783a551a42f05","content":"Ever since my son was born I have looked at life with a different perspective he has been my sole motivation to continuing my education."},{"_id":"54107d76f99783a551a42f07","treeId":"54107d76f99783a551a42eed","seq":617051,"position":2,"parentId":"54107d76f99783a551a42f04","content":"Supporting details"},{"_id":"54107d76f99783a551a42f08","treeId":"54107d76f99783a551a42eed","seq":620953,"position":1,"parentId":"54107d76f99783a551a42f07","content":"* Wanting to give my son everything I didn't have when i was young.\n* I know with a good job he will have everything he needs.\n* When he was born I learned to care about my future cause it was his as well."},{"_id":"54107d76f99783a551a42f09","treeId":"54107d76f99783a551a42eed","seq":617053,"position":3,"parentId":"54107d76f99783a551a42f04","content":"Concluding sentence"},{"_id":"48aa1fdf13f8ab495b000034","treeId":"54107d76f99783a551a42eed","seq":620958,"position":1,"parentId":"54107d76f99783a551a42f09","content":"In the past seven years I have had several people change my lifestyle and none of them were able too until my son was born and i realize that I had to change for the best of us."},{"_id":"54107d76f99783a551a42f0a","treeId":"54107d76f99783a551a42eed","seq":617054,"position":5,"parentId":null,"content":"Conclusion (6-8 sentences)"},{"_id":"54107d76f99783a551a42f0b","treeId":"54107d76f99783a551a42eed","seq":617055,"position":1,"parentId":"54107d76f99783a551a42f0a","content":"Paraphrase thesis"},{"_id":"54107d76f99783a551a42f0c","treeId":"54107d76f99783a551a42eed","seq":620967,"position":1,"parentId":"54107d76f99783a551a42f0b","content":"About who I am today isn't who I was a year ago but everything I have done its for the better for me and my family."},{"_id":"54107d76f99783a551a42f0d","treeId":"54107d76f99783a551a42eed","seq":617057,"position":2,"parentId":"54107d76f99783a551a42f0a","content":"Paraphrase topic sentences"},{"_id":"48aa281813f8ab495b000035","treeId":"54107d76f99783a551a42eed","seq":620973,"position":1,"parentId":"54107d76f99783a551a42f0d","content":"At first I may be judged by my appearance but I have worked very hard in the past 9 months to continue my education and i feel like i am doing a very good job so far."},{"_id":"54107d76f99783a551a42f0e","treeId":"54107d76f99783a551a42eed","seq":617058,"position":3,"parentId":"54107d76f99783a551a42f0a","content":"Final thoughts"},{"_id":"48aa290313f8ab495b000036","treeId":"54107d76f99783a551a42eed","seq":620976,"position":1,"parentId":"54107d76f99783a551a42f0e","content":"After Everything that I have worked for I wouldn't change where I am today for where I was a year ago."},{"_id":"54107d76f99783a551a42f0f","treeId":"54107d76f99783a551a42eed","seq":617059,"position":6,"parentId":null,"content":""}],"tree":{"_id":"54107d76f99783a551a42eed","name":"Who Am I","publicUrl":"jpinales"}}