• introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 1 (8-12) sentences)

  • Body paragraph 2 (8-12) sentences)

  • Body paragraph 3 (8-12) sentences)

  • introduction (6-8 sentences

  • Lead-in (attention getter)

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement ( main idea of the essay + essay map: main argument + the three points points you’re going to discuss)

  • Topic sentences 1 ( main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentences)

  • Concluding sentence ( wrap up paragraph and ties everything together)

  • topic sentences 2

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentences

  • topic sentences 3

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentences

  • paraphrase thesis statement

  • paragraph topic sentences

  • Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?

  • I can do whatever I want in life.

  • I am fun person because I love sports , hanging out whit my friends, and taking long walks.

  • I loves sports.

    • Because I like running.
    • I’m a really competitive person.
  • Hanging with my friends.

    • We go out for dinner on the weekends.
    • Going out shopping.
  • Taking long walks.

    • Helps me think better about lifes lessons.
    • Gives time to relax.
  • I want to be remembered as someone who never gave up and always tried my best to win.

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