• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in

  • Build to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement ( main idea of the essay + the three points you’re going to focus on)

  • Topic sentence (main idea of the paragraph

  • Supporting detail (examples of you’re topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentence (ties whole paragraph together)

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting detail

  • Concluding sentance

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting detail

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrases thesis statement

  • Paraphrases your three topic sentences

  • End with final thoughts (what do you want your reader to do/ remember?)

  • Who am i. I’m a very energetic person, because i love to watch and play sports, dance, and travel.

  • Sports brings out the inner guy out of me, but i don’t just watch it i play it.

    • playing soccer
    • watching basketball
    • what it means to me.
    • Dancing has always been who i am. It runs through my veins.

      • music
      • career in it
      • how i got started
    • I’ve been to most of the U.S but i want to go further and tour the world not just the country.

      • places Ive been too
      • what Ive learned
      • cultures
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It runs through my veins."},{"_id":"47f911cf25e85b656d000020","treeId":"47f8fd5a25e85b656d00000e","seq":531409,"position":2,"parentId":"47f9021925e85b656d000012","content":"Supporting detail "},{"_id":"48b17e4626ff3e23b3000032","treeId":"47f8fd5a25e85b656d00000e","seq":624607,"position":1,"parentId":"47f911cf25e85b656d000020","content":"* music\n* career in it \n* how i got started"},{"_id":"47f9125725e85b656d000021","treeId":"47f8fd5a25e85b656d00000e","seq":531427,"position":3,"parentId":"47f9021925e85b656d000012","content":"Concluding sentance"},{"_id":"47f9033b25e85b656d000013","treeId":"47f8fd5a25e85b656d00000e","seq":531104,"position":4,"parentId":null,"content":"Body paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)"},{"_id":"47f91a8025e85b656d000028","treeId":"47f8fd5a25e85b656d00000e","seq":531551,"position":1,"parentId":"47f9033b25e85b656d000013","content":"Topic sentence"},{"_id":"48b17b5e26ff3e23b3000031","treeId":"47f8fd5a25e85b656d00000e","seq":624567,"position":1,"parentId":"47f91a8025e85b656d000028","content":"I've been to most of the U.S but i want to go further and tour the world not just the country."},{"_id":"47f91ae825e85b656d000029","treeId":"47f8fd5a25e85b656d00000e","seq":531557,"position":2,"parentId":"47f9033b25e85b656d000013","content":"Supporting detail"},{"_id":"48b1862926ff3e23b3000035","treeId":"47f8fd5a25e85b656d00000e","seq":624700,"position":1,"parentId":"47f91ae825e85b656d000029","content":"* places Ive been too \n* what Ive learned\n* cultures "},{"_id":"47f91b6a25e85b656d00002a","treeId":"47f8fd5a25e85b656d00000e","seq":531562,"position":3,"parentId":"47f9033b25e85b656d000013","content":"Concluding sentence"},{"_id":"47f912e625e85b656d000022","treeId":"47f8fd5a25e85b656d00000e","seq":531437,"position":4.5,"parentId":null,"content":""},{"_id":"47f904b925e85b656d000014","treeId":"47f8fd5a25e85b656d00000e","seq":531129,"position":5,"parentId":null,"content":"Body paragraph (6-8 sentences)"},{"_id":"47f9137c25e85b656d000024","treeId":"47f8fd5a25e85b656d00000e","seq":531459,"position":4,"parentId":"47f904b925e85b656d000014","content":"Paraphrases thesis statement"},{"_id":"47f9147b25e85b656d000025","treeId":"47f8fd5a25e85b656d00000e","seq":531498,"position":5,"parentId":"47f904b925e85b656d000014","content":"\nParaphrases your three topic sentences"},{"_id":"47f9169a25e85b656d000026","treeId":"47f8fd5a25e85b656d00000e","seq":531543,"position":6,"parentId":"47f904b925e85b656d000014","content":"End with final thoughts (what do you want your reader to do/ remember?)"},{"_id":"47f9132725e85b656d000023","treeId":"47f8fd5a25e85b656d00000e","seq":531447,"position":6,"parentId":null,"content":""}],"tree":{"_id":"47f8fd5a25e85b656d00000e","name":"kim writing","publicUrl":"kim-writing"}}