• Intro

  • Body paragraph 1

  • Body paragraph 2

  • Body paragraph 3

  • Conclusion

  • lead-in

  • Development (build up to the thesis)

  • Thesis

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis

  • Paraphrase topic sentence

  • Final thoughts

  • “Family is not an important thing.Its everything” Michael J. Fox

  • I believe that family is the most important thing in life because I could rely on them, I will never get lonely and,family celebrates every happiness.

  • You could rely on your family no matter what problem you are in.

    • money problem
    • school problem
    • a relationship problem
  • When the family is around you will never feel lonely.

    • trips
    • go out to the movies
    • they will always be available
  • The family is where you could share happiness among them.

    • Christmas
    • Thanksgiving
    • The birthday partys
  • Family is the most important thing in the world because I could trust them, I will never be lonely with them and I could share my happiness.

  • “Family means no one gets left behind or forgotten”. George Santayana

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