“Family is not an important thing.Its everything” Michael J. Fox
Development (build up to the thesis)
I believe that family is the most important thing in life because I could rely on them, I will never get lonely and,family celebrates every happiness.
Body paragraph 1
You could rely on your family no matter what problem you are in.
- money problem
- school problem
- a relationship problem
Body paragraph 2
When the family is around you will never feel lonely.
- go out to the movies
- they will always be available
Body paragraph 3
The family is where you could share happiness among them.
- The birthday partys
Family is the most important thing in the world because I could trust them, I will never be lonely with them and I could share my happiness.
Paraphrase topic sentence
“Family means no one gets left behind or forgotten”. George Santayana