Intro

lead-in

“Family is not an important thing.Its everything” Michael J. Fox

Development (build up to the thesis)

Thesis

I believe that family is the most important thing in life because I could rely on them, I will never get lonely and,family celebrates every happiness.

Body paragraph 1

Topic sentence

You could rely on your family no matter what problem you are in.

Supporting details

Concluding sentence

Body paragraph 2

Topic sentence

When the family is around you will never feel lonely.

Supporting details

Concluding sentence

Body paragraph 3

Topic sentence

The family is where you could share happiness among them.

Supporting details

Concluding sentence

Conclusion

Paraphrase thesis

Family is the most important thing in the world because I could trust them, I will never be lonely with them and I could share my happiness.

Paraphrase topic sentence

Final thoughts

“Family means no one gets left behind or forgotten”. George Santayana