• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in (attention getter)

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you’re going to discuss)

  • Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)

  • Topic sentence 2

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence 3

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

  • Paraphrase topic sentences

  • Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)

  • Life is hard I had to grow up fast my family has always had a tough life. I have promised them I will not take the same road they took. They want me to have a better life than them they don’t want me to be suffering of my future children. I had to learn how to be responsible for each of my actions.

  • So now im responsible when it comes to my own responsibilities I took a big step on going to college to give my family a better life. My family will always come first then me I want to give them everything that I can provide for them and show them how you have to earn things in life.

  • I’m very responsible when it comes to my own responsibilities.

    • Responsibilities
    • Life
  • I took a big step by entering College for something better.

    • Good choices like going to college
    • How it will pay off
  • The main reason I entered college is to give my family a better life.

    • What are the reason I entered college
    • How successful I will be in life
  • Everything you do in life will pay off, that’s why you have to make good decisions in life. Always be positive on what you want to do in life and keep it on mind.

  • I have to make good decisions in life so I entered College to give my family a better life and be able to take care of all my responsibilities. Life will be hard and nothing in in will be free you have to work for it. I want to be prepared for whatever life brings me.

  • I want the reader to remember that everything you do in life pays off even the easiest things.

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My family will always come first then me I want to give them everything that I can provide for them and show them how you have to earn things in life."},{"_id":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf7","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625367,"position":2,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf5","content":""},{"_id":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf8","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625368,"position":2,"parentId":null,"content":"Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)"},{"_id":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf9","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625369,"position":1,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf8","content":"Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)"},{"_id":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bfa","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625419,"position":1,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf9","content":"\n\nI’m very responsible when it comes to my own responsibilities.\n"},{"_id":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bfb","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625371,"position":2,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf8","content":"Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)"},{"_id":"4902a05fb249a079ba00002b","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":663806,"position":1,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bfb","content":"* Responsibilities\n* Life\n\n"},{"_id":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bfc","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625372,"position":3,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf8","content":"Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)"},{"_id":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bfd","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625373,"position":3,"parentId":null,"content":"Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)"},{"_id":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bfe","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625374,"position":1,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bfd","content":"Topic sentence 2"},{"_id":"48b20530618946006500001d","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625430,"position":1,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bfe","content":"I took a big step by entering College for something better.\n"},{"_id":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bff","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625375,"position":2,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bfd","content":"Supporting details"},{"_id":"4902a392b249a079ba00002c","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":663818,"position":1,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bff","content":"* Good choices like going to college\n* How it will pay off"},{"_id":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43c00","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625376,"position":3,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bfd","content":"Concluding sentence"},{"_id":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43c01","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625377,"position":4,"parentId":null,"content":"Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)"},{"_id":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43c02","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625378,"position":1,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43c01","content":"Topic sentence 3"},{"_id":"48b20594618946006500001e","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625426,"position":1,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43c02","content":"The main reason I entered college is to give my family a better life.\n"},{"_id":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43c03","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625379,"position":2,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43c01","content":"Supporting details"},{"_id":"4902a54db249a079ba00002d","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":663820,"position":1,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43c03","content":"* What are the reason I entered college\n* How successful I will be in life"},{"_id":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43c04","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625380,"position":3,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43c01","content":"Concluding sentence"},{"_id":"490e3edce308f1626c000032","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":670307,"position":1,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43c04","content":""},{"_id":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43c05","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625381,"position":5,"parentId":null,"content":"Conclusion (6-8 sentences)"},{"_id":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43c06","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":625382,"position":1,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43c05","content":"Paraphrase thesis statement"},{"_id":"49073a089fea80c2b5000023","treeId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43bf1","seq":673960,"position":1,"parentId":"5411ccf0f99783a551a43c06","content":"Everything you do in life will pay off, that's why you have to make good decisions in life. 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