• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in (attention getter)

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map; main argument +the three points you’re going to discuss)

  • Build up to the thesis statement

  • Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

  • supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)

  • concluding sentence wrap up everything

  • topic sentence 2

  • supporting details

  • concluding senetence

  • Topic sentence 3

  • supporting details

  • concluding senetence

  • paraphrase thesis statement

  • paraphrase topic sentence

  • final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember)

  • Most importantly would be what Ive been thought throughout my time existing the most important things in life which for who am i.

  • Learning to fall and finding new ways in how life really works and what Ive turned up to be; bases in culture, knowledge and family

  • Iwis, I know where my roots are from even though i was born here. id find it pretty awesome the culture that Ive over come and Ive learned through out years that ive been by it.

  • Mexican culture is more of being who you are and of course the beliefs what we celebrate and the events that concurred.

  • Having to be part of it and realize how astonishing our culture really is celebrating in big with your love one and strangers.

  • My Family are the persons that will always have my heart even if my mother is a single mother which shes taken the role of being mother and a father

  • Mrs. Herbert my mother has always pushed me to be a better person than her she wants t0 see me succeed in life and see me happy

  • I will go the way she wants to see me bright, her showing me she cares and values me and believes in me and i love her for working hard by her own and given me the things ive always ask for.

  • My knowledge in knowing what to do with my life Im currently enrolled her at South Texas College

  • my Major is criminal justice im currently seeking to getting there; id find it very prepossessing i genually bu slowly want to get there

  • Ive have to learn and try my best to get where i wanna get which will take time but at the end everything will be done and will matter and ill be proud of my self.

  • i will need to over come all my objectives i have in mind and i will lean what i have learned throughout life i shouldn’t take for granted.

  • learning that my culture, family knowledge is and will be first and it matters what you learn throughout life.

  • I wouldn’t want or find it pity if people take what they should really value the most for granted

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