• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in (attention getter)

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you’re going to discuss)

  • Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)

  • Topic sentence 2

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence 3

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

  • Paraphrase topic sentences

  • Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)

  • Everything in my life has help me became the man I am today.

  • My goals, family, and free time is what defines me as a person and as a human being.

  • My goal enables me to go on and move forward with my career.

  • healthcare
    body
    mind

  • One of many things that keep on pace is my family.

  • my daughter
    my parents
    my wife

  • Free time has many reasons in my life to keep me sane and grounded.

  • video games
    drinking
    workout

  • Thanks to all these thing I feel I’m a better person and man.

  • My goals have always kept me moving forward on pace. My family keeps me on track to become a better family member . My social life has been a grounded rode to keep me relax and have good mental foundation .

  • In the end everything helps me stay positivity and live my life to the fullest. Knowing that I have these opportunities and amazing people around to keep my on task. Is everything I can ask for and want in these beautiful yet short life that God gives us.

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