• introduction (6-8) sentences

  • body paragraph (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • lead in (attention getter)

  • build up thesis statement

  • thesis statement

  • topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

  • supporting detail

  • conclusion sentence

  • topic sentence 2

  • supporting details

  • conclusion sentence

  • topic sentence 3

  • supporting details

  • conclusion sentence

  • paraphrase thesis statement

  • paraphrase three topic sentence

  • final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/ remember

  • when it comes to talk about my life, people get shock because its not really what they expect to hear.

  • what I think I live for, its for my hobbies, for my work and for my family

  • what takes the fun part of my live its my hobbies.

  • working its not as hard but I like to work hard.

  • everything I all ways do and care for its for my family.

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