introduction (6-8) sentences
body paragraph (8-12 sentences)
Body paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)
Body paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)
conclusion (6-8 sentences)
lead in (attention getter)
build up thesis statement
thesis statement
topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)
supporting detail
conclusion sentence
topic sentence 2
supporting details
conclusion sentence
topic sentence 3
supporting details
conclusion sentence
paraphrase thesis statement
paraphrase three topic sentence
final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/ remember
when it comes to talk about my life, people get shock because its not really what they expect to hear.
what I think I live for, its for my hobbies, for my work and for my family
what takes the fun part of my live its my hobbies.
working its not as hard but I like to work hard.
everything I all ways do and care for its for my family.