introduction (6-8) sentences

lead in (attention getter)

when it comes to talk about my life, people get shock because its not really what they expect to hear.

build up thesis statement

thesis statement

what I think I live for, its for my hobbies, for my work and for my family

body paragraph (8-12 sentences)

topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

what takes the fun part of my live its my hobbies.

supporting detail

conclusion sentence

Body paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

topic sentence 2

working its not as hard but I like to work hard.

supporting details

conclusion sentence

Body paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

topic sentence 3

everything I all ways do and care for its for my family.

supporting details

conclusion sentence

conclusion (6-8 sentences)

paraphrase thesis statement

paraphrase three topic sentence

final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/ remember