introduction (6-8) sentences
lead in (attention getter)
when it comes to talk about my life, people get shock because its not really what they expect to hear.
build up thesis statement
what I think I live for, its for my hobbies, for my work and for my family
body paragraph (8-12 sentences)
topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)
what takes the fun part of my live its my hobbies.
Body paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)
topic sentence 2
working its not as hard but I like to work hard.
Body paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)
topic sentence 3
everything I all ways do and care for its for my family.
conclusion (6-8 sentences)
paraphrase thesis statement
paraphrase three topic sentence
final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/ remember