Introduction (6-8 sentences)
Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)
Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)
Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)
Conclusion (6-8 sentences)
Lead-in (attention getter)
Build up to thesis statement
Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you’re going to discuss)
Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)
Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)
Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)
Topic sentence 2
Supporting details
Concluding sentence
Topic sentence 3
Supporting details
Concluding sentence
Paraphrase thesis statement
Paraphrase topic sentences
Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)
Living the life I wanted was not what I got, I had to earn the way I living today.
My life is tough because i had to work for what i want, discipline myself, and also be caring to family and friends.
Growing up things weren’t handed to me.
*Phone
I had to discipline myself to make sure everything was going good.
*School
Being the person in my family and friends depened on was not an easy job.
My life style is not what I wanted. I had to work for what i wanted, discipline myself, and also be caring to family and friends.
Working when I was young, disciplining myself at a young age, and trying to give my all to my family and friends.
My childhood could have been different. Maybe more like a child my age, but I would not change how my life was and who I am today.