• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in (attention getter)

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you’re going to discuss)

  • Topic sentence 1 (main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)

  • Topic sentence 2

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence 3

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

  • Paraphrase topic sentences

  • Final thoughts (what do you want the reader to do/remember?)

  • Living the life I wanted was not what I got, I had to earn the way I living today.

  • My life is tough because i had to work for what i want, discipline myself, and also be caring to family and friends.

  • Growing up things weren’t handed to me.

  • *Phone

    • Cloths, shoes, ect.
    • Car
  • I had to discipline myself to make sure everything was going good.

  • *School

    • Bills
      *Money
  • Being the person in my family and friends depened on was not an easy job.

    • Sick brothers
      *Denver
    • Marcus and Chris
  • My life style is not what I wanted. I had to work for what i wanted, discipline myself, and also be caring to family and friends.

  • Working when I was young, disciplining myself at a young age, and trying to give my all to my family and friends.

  • My childhood could have been different. Maybe more like a child my age, but I would not change how my life was and who I am today.

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