• Into

  • Body Paragraph 1

  • Body Paragraph 2

  • Body Paragraph 3

  • Conclusion

  • lead- in

  • Development (build up to the thesis)

  • Thesis

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentences

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis

  • Paraphrase topic sentence

  • Final thoughts

  • I am a eighteen year old girl who is finding herself in this cruel world.

  • eighteen year old girl

  • I am like a bird trying to learn how to fly.
    Being the middle isn’t as great as bring the oldest.

  • eighteen year old girl finding herself

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