• Introduction (6-8 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8 sentences)

  • Lead-in

  • Build up to thesis statement

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay + the three points you’re going to focus on)

  • Topic sentence (main idea of the paragraph)

  • Supporting details (examples of your topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentence (ties whole paragraph together)

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase thesis statement

  • Paraphrase your three topic sentences

  • Final thoughts

      • I am from a unique family that is different from most, my family were all born in different places, they were all raised from low income, and are very family oriented.

      • My grandmother and grandfather were both raised in similar ways.

        • they had low income families
        • worked at such a young age
        • were raised to work hard to earn what they wanted
        • In my family we have different kind of cultures and respect all, we have native american, Puerto Ricans, and hispanics.

          • its a tradition at each gatherings we have dances and music
          • at some gatherings we have a dance that my grandmother and grandfather do that tells a story
          • each and everyone of us has to bring a food dish to our gatherings out of respect for the house were going too.
        • My great-grandmother and great-grandfather from my grandmother side are very religious, they have strong beliefs in remedies, and in myths.

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