• Intro (6-8 sentences)

  • Body Paragraph 1 (8-12 sentences)

  • body paragraph 2 (8-12 sentences)

  • Body paragraph 3 (8-12 sentences)

  • Conclusion (6-8) sentemnces

  • Lead in (antention getter)

  • Development (build up to thesis)

  • Thesis statement (main idea of the essay+essay map: main argument + the three points you’re going to discuss)

  • Topic sentence 1 (main idea of paragraph)

  • Supporting details (2-3 examples to support your topic sentence)

  • Concluding sentence (wraps up paragraph and ties everything together)

  • Topic sentence 2

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Topic sentence 3

  • Supporting details

  • Concluding sentence

  • Paraphrase Thesis statement

  • Paraphrase topic sentence

  • Final thoughts

  • The people I hold dear in my heart are the people that made me who I am today. I am Gerardo Xavier Flores who was born in Mcallen and now attending South Texas College. I consider myself to be kind respectful; moreover I am a person who enjoys the presence of family and friends. Three reasons of why I am who I are the influence of my mom, a sense of humor, and a skill in soccer.

  • The reason of why I am who I am is the influence of my mom.

    • kind, respectful
    • Listener
    • baptized
  • The next reason I am myself is having a sense of humor.

    • sense of humor
    • laughs
  • Another reason to answer who I am is a skill in soccer.

    • Skill
    • teammate
    • brothers
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