• intro

  • Body paragraph 1

  • Body paragraph 2

  • Body paragraph 3

  • conclusion

  • lead-in

  • development (build up the thesis )

  • thesis

  • topic sentence

  • supporting detail

  • concluding sentence

  • topic sentence

  • supporting detail

  • concluding sentence

  • topic sentence

  • supporting detail

  • concluding sentence

  • paraphrase thesis

  • paragraph topic sentence

  • The American dream is not so easy as it sounds .

  • When I moved to a new country I had to leave my family , I had to learn a new culture, and I had to make new friends

  • Leaving my family was not very easy for the fact that we are very attached.

  • My three sisters are very loving I love playing soccer with my cousins
    *family parties are the best

  • Having to learn a new culture is very though.

  • leaning two languages at the same time I wasn’t very used to the spicy food

  • making new friends is not something I am very good at

  • Being the new kid Trying to fit in
    *Getting bullied

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