intro
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Body paragraph 2
Body paragraph 3
conclusion
lead-in
development (build up the thesis )
thesis
topic sentence
supporting detail
concluding sentence
topic sentence
supporting detail
concluding sentence
topic sentence
supporting detail
concluding sentence
paraphrase thesis
paragraph topic sentence
The American dream is not so easy as it sounds .
When I moved to a new country I had to leave my family , I had to learn a new culture, and I had to make new friends
Leaving my family was not very easy for the fact that we are very attached.
My three sisters are very loving
I love playing soccer with my cousins
*family parties are the best
Having to learn a new culture is very though.
leaning two languages at the same time I wasn’t very used to the spicy food
making new friends is not something I am very good at
Being the new kid
Trying to fit in
*Getting bullied